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the mystery and he succeeds. Even the title of the book   story that allow us to deduce what the speckled band is,
              has his name in it.                                before reading the ending.
              José: Right. I think we all agree, but I believe Helen   Clara: Exactly. For example, we know that Dr Roylott
              Stoner is a main character, as well, because she is trying   has wild animals in the house. This is a real clue because
              to avoid dying. That’s the problem she faces. There   the speckled band is, in fact, a snake that looks like a
              wouldn’t be a mystery to solve if it wasn’t for her and   speckled band.
              everything in the story revolves around her. She is also   Emilia: Yes, but the author tricks us by saying that
              one of the narrators, since she is the one who tells the   gypsies also wear a type of band around their neck. So,
              others what happened in the house.                 we have two clues and we don’t know which one
              Clara: OK, what about Watson? I think he is the other   to choose.
              narrator, as he is the one telling us, the readers, the   José: Well, we do have two clues, but we never pay
              story about this mystery.                          attention to the first one, because it’s mentioned just
              Emilia: Exactly. Without Watson we wouldn’t know the   as a small detail to describe Dr Roylott and his strange
              story, because he is the one telling it. But he is also   habits. I think the reader picks up the second clue
              a supporting character, because he asks questions   because it sounds more convincing, even though it’s
              to make Holmes explain what happened. This is very   fake. At the time, people didn’t like foreigners and they
              important, or else we wouldn’t know what was going   were afraid of gypsies. Even Helen is scared of them and
              on inside Holmes’ mind. He is Holmes’ foil, because the   doesn’t talk nicely about them.
              detective is very smart and Watson is not, just like us. He   Clara: OK. I think we have to make sure to provide the
              helps Holmes appear smarter than the rest of us.   same two clues in our comic, so the reader believes
              José: Helen is in contrast to the detective because she is   it’s the gypsies. But when he or she reads the comic
              afraid, and he is not, a very important trick of the trade.   again, they will notice the first and real clue that leads
              Detectives shouldn’t be fearful, or they wouldn’t be able   to the killer.
              to solve cases.                                    Emilia And José: Good idea!
              Clara: What about the other characters?
              Emilia: Julia and the stepfather, Dr. Roylott, are   Track 56 (Practice 8, Activity 23)
              supporting characters, as well. Julia is in contrast to
              Helen by the fact that she died and Helen didn’t, she   Emilia: In this panel, Watson is waking up and Mr.
              also never married and Helen did, because she survived   Holmes is standing right next to him. It is very early
              and her sister didn’t.                             in the morning. In the second panel, they are both in
              José: Dr. Roylott is the bad guy of the story. He is   the living room and there’s a young woman dressed in
              greedy because he wants all the money to himself. He is   black. She looks tired and unhappy, and her face is very
              also the only one who likes the gypsies.           white. Holmes greets her and tells her that he is aware
              Clara: What about the other characters?            that she has traveled a long way to meet with them.
              Emilia: Which ones?
              José: The ones with no name: the mother, the gypsies,   Track 57 (Practice 8, Activity 24)
              Julia’s fiancé and Helen’s husband.
              Clara: Well, that’s easy, they are incidental. They barely   Emilia: In this panel, Watson is waking up and Mr.
              play a part in the story, do not interact with other   Holmes is standing right next to him. It is very early in
              characters, never say a line, do not change location and,   the morning.
              most importantly, would not change the story if they   José: What do they look like?
              weren’t in it.                                     Emilia: I don’t know. The story does not say.
              Emilia: We are missing one very important character:   Clara: Well, how do you visualize them? You have to
              the snake!                                         think of something, because you will have to draw them
              José: That’s not a character; it’s just a prop!    in the comic strip.
                                                                 Emilia: OK, let me see… Watson is wearing his pajamas
              Track 55 (Practice 8, Activity 22)                 and is sitting on the bed. He just woke up, so he could
                                                                 be yawning and stretching his arms. He is performing
              Emilia: Do you think the plan includes all the relevant   the typical actions of a person who just woke up.
              parts of the story?                                José: What about Holmes?
              José: I do. I think that we can provoke the sense of fear   Emilia: He is fully dressed. He is wearing a suit and a tie.
              in the reader, as we discussed when we were analyzing   Clara: What about their physical appearance?
              the sound effects and what goes on in the story.   Emilia: Holmes is tall and thin, and Watson is shorter
              Clara: OK, great. But what about the clues that lead to   and a bit chubby. He also has a grey moustache.
              the killer in the story?                           José: OK, so they are not young.
              José: What do you mean? I don’t understand.        Emilia: They are middle-aged men. Not young, but not
              Emilia: Well, since this is a mystery, we have to give   old, either.
              some clues, so an attentive reader can predict that the
              stepfather is the killer, but we have to be careful, just like
              the author.
              José: Oh, I see. You mean that there are parts in the




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